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People find it difficult to speak in front of public or to give a presentation. How important is to have the skill of speaking. Do you think children at school should be taught public speaking.

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Social skills
 are important for the development of individuals.
However
, it is observed that people are scared to speak up in an open forum. I strongly believe that
this
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 early stage by participating in various programs at school and I will give reasons for the importance of speaking in the following passages. There are several reasons which exhibit the importance of giving an opinion or providing a presentation in front of the public.
To begin
 with, nowadays, it is a demand for employers to hire candidates with great communication skills.
For example
, in
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 interview, employers ask impromptu questions to a candidate and ask him to elaborate in his words. So, they can check the
person
's ability to speak. In many organizations, it is a key responsibility of an employee to present data to the superiors, the
person
 who has great presentation skills has a higher chance of promotion than others.
Secondly
, speaking has an equal relationship with confidence. The more an individual speaks in front of people, the more confident he or she becomes. Ample efforts have been done by a
person
 who wants to give a public speech which leads to self-confidence. Schools are performing
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 in the holistic development of students. For the bright future of children, educational authorities should consider the demand of the corporate world and teach them how to speak in front of the public. Authorities should include the subject of speaking in academic curricula and perform various exercises
such
 as group discussion, newspaper reading and opinions on current affairs.
This
 program will enhance not only the speaking part but
also
 boost the confidence of the student.Schools should encourage students to take participation in
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such
 subjects as
this
 will help them for a better future. Overall, I believe that, if a
person
 wants to sustain in
this
 cutthroat competition he must have great speaking skills and if he learns from the school at an early age it would be beneficial to the
person
.
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