Internet will replace written books. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, due to the improvement of technology, more and more physical things will transfer into mutual ones. Some people claim that written
books
are going to replaced
by electronic Add a missing verb
be replaced
books
because of the internet
. Whereas, In my opinion, I think the
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books
will not be replaced in the future. In the following essay, I will explain the reasons why I disagree.
It is claimed that reducing to produce
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production
real
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of real
books
can also
decrease the emission of carbon dioxide. The reason is that we don't need to cut down many forests, so the more trees survive the more carbon dioxide they can absorb and turn this
into oxygen. Correct pronoun usage
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Moreover
, reading books
through internet
is really convenient and Correct article usage
the internet
also
save
a lot of time. Correct subject-verb agreement
saves
For example
, readers can download the
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books
on website
or online Fix the agreement mistake
websites
book stores
to their mobile phones, so that they can enjoy reading whenever they get a chance without waiting for the delivery.
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bookstores
However
, despite these advantages, I strongly believe that written books
will not be vanished
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vanish
have vanished
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Fistly
, only the physical lectures can be collected and are more valuable. Correct your spelling
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This
means that the value of articles depends on not only their contents but also
their history. The time which
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in which
books
survive will let them more expensive and worth of
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Furthermore
, schools are more likely to use physical textbooks. Because, if students study by
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with
this
situation will give them a chance to Correct your spelling
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internet
and will not pay attention Add an article
the internet
on
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to
study
.
In conclusion, though Fix the agreement mistake
studies
internet
is so useful and has many benefits, there are many things that Add an article
the internet
it
cannot replace Correct pronoun usage
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the
written Correct article usage
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books
. In my view, the actual books
will always play an important rule
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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