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Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort. To what extent to you agree with this? How do you think space explonation will change in the future?

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National dignity is said to be more important than global achievement in
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exploration
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. I agree with the statement as
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exploration
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 is extremely impactful for national matters. In the future, the
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 towards
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 will become more massive.
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space
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exploration
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 is mostly conducted by NASA, a
space
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 organization that contributes to the global world. Most of their research includes sending astronauts to observe outer
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.
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, it is essential for a country to conduct their own
exploration
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.
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, Indonesia has its own national institute of
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 that
responsible
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 for the
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’s related studies.
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, Indonesia has its own satellite named Palapa
that is
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 used to maintain the signal for communication. More than that, the satellite can detect a disaster situation and capture its location. As an Indonesian, I am proud of what Indonesia has done in regard to
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exploration
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.
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, massive
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exploration
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 is likely to happen in the future. It is possible for some living beings,
such
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 as plants, to be planted on the other planet to test the planet’s condition and its possibility to be lived by humans. With a high level of technology, the researcher will receive the signal sent by the plant faster, which might lead to some conclusions in regard to the planet’s situation.
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, there might be a time when the earth is not the only planet that could be lived on. In conclusion, research related to outer
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 is undeniably essential for the national scope and there is a prediction that there will be a huge breakthrough by keeping living things in
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 as
exploration
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 in the future.

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