Some people think new homes need to be built with private outdoor space such as a garden, yard, or balcony. Do you think this is more advantageous or more disadvantageous?

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new modern
houses’
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construction ought to be designed with an additional outdoor space
such
as a garden or
balcony
. From my point of view, it is a good idea to build homes with outdoor
areas
since
such
areas
can demonstrate the beauty of
the
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nature and
this
essay will examine both pros and cons of
this
issue.
First
and foremost, there are a number of significant benefits of constructing houses with a garden or
balcony
since personal outdoor living
areas
can give a sense of satisfaction as most
of
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gardens
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are so specious with many gorgeous flowers and
also
with a beautiful landscape that can be relaxing to our eyes and mind.
Furthermore
,
gardens
can
also
be a source of food
and
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since
it
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creats
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many opportunities for individuals to plant various types of
friut
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fruit
trees.
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of the individuals who reside in rural
areas
own
a
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private
gardens
and they consider
gardens
not one of the biggest
source
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of food but
also
the main source of income. Turning to the other side of the argument, despite the obvious advantages of having a
balcony
or garden at home have
also
some disadvantages since it requires a significant amount of money to construct
such
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of places.
In addition
to
this
,
to build
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new
gardens
in urban
areas
can be dangerous to the environment since during the building process construction jobs might influence negatively
to
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the
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nature.
For instance
, nowadays majority of the construction works have caused some serious environmental problems. To conclude, having weighed everything mentioned
up
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, I can come to the conclusion
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that, despite the obvious disadvantages of having
gardens
or
balcony
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at home the advantages of
this
overweight
it’s disadvantages
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since
such
places can be a perfect spot for fun and relaxation.
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