In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting University studies. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage for young people who decide to do this.

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young people is successful all over Midwestern cities according to the survey.

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, the

lecturer

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says that it’s deceptive if we don’t evaluate it carefully. The author states that using TV and

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as communication tools and

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holding events or workshops at school are good implementations to approach teens.

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, the survey shows good results.

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, the survey takers said they have joined

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and have seen the Ads at least one time and

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leads to the feeling that they prefer not to smoke or even try to smoke. The

lecturer

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,

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, points out that if we take a look at their

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after the

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, it doesn’t seem long-lasting. The

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asserts that the result of

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campaign

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is dramatically changed after 6 months ; young people are very likely to smoke more

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year and don’t want to attend the

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again.

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, the author

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mentions that the public health department wants to expand the antismoking

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to gain more

teenagers

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involvements

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because it obviously can go

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a long way and address

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health issues. But as young people might change their thoughts so the number of smokers will not be decreased. The

lecturer

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speaks that they need to honestly take a look at whole figures for more efficiency.