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Many supermarkets are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced.
What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

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Over the
last
 few years, there has been a growing concern about selling other nations’
products
. It has brought not only
people
’s attention but
also
 debatable issues. It is thought by some
people
 that countries demand other nations’
products
 to allow
people
 to have plenty of benefits,
however
, drawbacks can
also
 be caused by it.
This
 essay will talk about the pros and cons of
this
 phenomenon with reasons and examples. On one side of the argument, some
people
 are convinced that the drawbacks of providing different countries’
foods
 or snacks to customers considerably outweigh its advantages. The main reason for believing
this
 is that it affects local farmers. In Switzerland,
for example
, the number of farmers decreased by 30
percent
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per cent
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 since they started commerce with Japan and China in 2000.
Besides
, it is
also
 possible to say that global importing has environmental problems.
Products
 have to be transported thousands of miles and huge amounts of fossil fuels are burnt to achieve
this
. It can cause ocean pollution.
Therefore
, it is no
defense
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defence
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 to say that several
people
 will be given several disadvantages from importing
foods
 or objects. Despite these disadvantages, it is
also
 probable to make the opposing case. One of the most benefits is that a country might import the resources that they do not have from other countries.
For instance
, Korea lacks spices for producing instant
foods
, so they have to import spices from China. Another positive is that
people
 often have
this
 opinion since they have more choices. As the country imports
products
,
people
 can cook different kinds of country’s
foods
 and they can wear different nation’s clothes. I believe that it is one part of sharing cultures.
As a result
, We should not forget the advantages of selling imported stocks. To conclude, while there are beneficial points of can use lacked resources and enjoying
a different kinds
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a different kind
different kinds
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 of
foods
 and objects that are imported, some can be lost
as a result
. I have discussed the pros and cons which explain my standpoints. From what has been discussed above, I may conclude that I firmly believe that there are more benefits than harms to
this
 phenomenon.
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