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In the future all cars, buses amd trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantage?

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In the
next
 ,years different types of vehicles will become automatic and not need any driver and
people
 sit on them just as passengers. I believe it will be a revolution in
this
 industry and have numerous advantages for humans.
This
 type of vehicle could help in different ways.
Firstly
 accidents number will decline remarkably because human error plays an important role and with help of the technology
people
 can experience more reliable and safe roads. It
also
 helps with traffic congestion, as bad behaviours of drivers make a lot of problems and
besides
 officials and governments will be able to provide suitable programmes for vehicle systems.
People
 can use their time more efficiently, for ,instance they can eat their meals in the way of their work or check their emails and do other tasks. Some
people
 believe that
this
 cutting-edge technology has serious problems. At
first
 drivers of trucks, public transport vehicles and online delivery services lose their jobs and as a consequence unemployment rate will be jumping.
This
 system
also
 is not safe it can be hacked by hackers and big disasters could happen. In conclusion, driverless vehicles have tons of benefits for customers preventing of of
thousands
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 deaths on the roads and helping us to have clean air and not-crowded streets which are safe for our children to play. Critics
also
 should be not worried about unemployment because technology always new opportunities even though removes some jobs. In the ,end it will be legal to eat behind the steer !
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