Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give a reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge & experience.
Children
must take their education through any method. Some people saying
that Wrong verb form
say
residence based
studies Add a hyphen
residence-based
is
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are
the
suitable method for Correct article usage
a
child’s
development. Others are argive that going to Correct article usage
a child’s
school
most prominent way to children
development. I would discuss Change noun form
children's
the
both methods and give my opinion Remove the article
apply
in
Change preposition
apply
the
below.
Some Correct article usage
apply
children
have had disabilities since born. When that type of children
’s best way to do their studies in their residence. Because when they are going to school
, some friends of them could be bullying them. For example
, in my school
one of my friend
Fix the agreement mistake
friends
unable
to Add a missing verb
is unable
walking
properly. Wrong verb form
walk
Thus
, some of my friends are
most of Unnecessary verb
apply
time
joking to him and most of Add an article
the time
time
he got some inconvenience during Add an article
the time
this
. Furthermore
, children
are easily addict
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are easily addicted
bad
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to bad
friend
in Fix the agreement mistake
friends
the
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apply
school
life. In my persona
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personal
experience
some my
friends are lost Change preposition
of my
his
future due to that friendships.
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their
On the other hand
, child
must Add an article
the child
a child
knowing
how he/she living in Change the verb form
know
be knowing
the
society. If they want to get that knowledge they must Correct article usage
apply
living
with Change the verb form
live
be living
the
different people and get the living Correct article usage
apply
experience
from them. For instance
, one of my office friend
he doing his all studies in his house. Fix the agreement mistake
friends
However
, when he coming
to society he does not know how to talk Wrong verb form
comes
in
Change preposition
to
the
people, Correct article usage
apply
specially
elders and Replace the word
especially
any one
can use Correct your spelling
anyone
he
for Correct pronoun usage
him
their
any things as he has Correct pronoun usage
apply
Add the particle
tonot
not
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no
experience
about
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with
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, Add an article
the child
a child
child
must mix up with different Fix the agreement mistake
children
culture
and gain the knowledge Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
how
to react Change preposition
of how
in
the two different them.
To sum up, Child should get their education through any stream. Change preposition
to
However
, when we considering
both methods my opinion is Wrong verb form
consider
children
’s most suitable way is to get the knowledge from the school
. Because he/she getting an education with social experience
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