The problem of litter on the streets of many towns and cities is getting worse. Why are we seeing more litter on our streets, and what can be done about it?

In many places, littering in the streets is a common
problem
,
it
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and it
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seems that it is becoming worse and worse. I believe there are several reasons that cause
this
problem
and it can be solved through some effective ways. On the one hand, there are several reasons that cause the
problem
.
Firstly
, there are always careless
people
around us who like to throw
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things from their hands without any conscious.
Secondly
, it is so hard to find a bin in some
city
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cities
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that it has a special policy about refuse.
For example
: in some areas in Taiwan, it is very hard to find a bin and
people
can’t dispose of their trash properly.
Finally
, products have excessive packaging because of many reasons.
On the other hand
, I believe that can be solved through some effective ways.
Firstly
, education is a
fundermental
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fundamental
method to advertise that littering is not a
properly
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behavior
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and it makes harmful to our environment.
For example
in Hong Kong, it put more resources in schools to educate the students about littering in the streets is not
a
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good
behavior
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and
also
try
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tries
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to send
this
message to citizens as well through different channels of media advertising.
Secondly
, it is more
conviently
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conveniently
for
people
to toss rubbish if adding more bins on the streets.
Finally
, I think
punishment
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is a worse but
effective
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more effective
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way to forbid
people
littering
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. In conclusion,
although
the littering
problem
is very common in many cities, there are still several effective ways that can be used to improve that situation.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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