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Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips

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Dear Karim, How is all going? I hope all are good in your family. I'm writing
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 letter to give a few guidelines regarding driving a car.
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, I'd like to tell you that you may be using public transport on your way to work from home and vice versa. It's quite hectic as you have to wait for a long on the bus stop. But I think there is a good solution to
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 problem.
Last
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 year I started learning to drive and now I'm fully trained in it. There are various benefits of driving, one is that you can commute greater distances in much lesser time. That's why I suggest you
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train yourself because driving will change your life. I will support you in that as well. So, Let me know when are you making your driving license. I hope you will do it soon.
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, I would recommend you a training school which will teach you to drive perfectly. "Simon Car training School " is just beside my home. They have expert trainers available especially on weekends which can be very fruitful for you. They can train you in just six weeks and they will charge you just 30 US dollars for it.
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, I believe that you should pay more attention to traffic signs as a precaution while driving. And you must not exceed the speed limit defined on the roads. I'm fully confident that
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 letter will definitely be very helpful for you. Thank you, yours lovingly, Aashiq Ali
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Driving licence
  • Public transportation
  • Independence
  • Daily commutes
  • Emergency transportation
  • Self-reliance
  • Structured learning environment
  • Professional driving instructors
  • Advanced driving techniques
  • Safety awareness
  • Flexible timings
  • Weather conditions
  • Basic vehicle maintenance
  • Traffic signs
  • Theory test material
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