The charts below show the number of French adults whose parents spoke a French regional language to them when they were children, and the number who speak a French regional language to their own children.
The bar chart indicates the
amount
of French Change the quantifier
number
adults
who have been raised speaking a French regional language
in the past, by comparison
to the number of adults
who speak a French regional language
to their own offspring currently.
Generally speaking, the proportion of parents who speak mothertounges
in the past is superior to the number speaking it to their children at the present time.
The Alsatian and Occitan Correct your spelling
mother tounges
language
tend to be the most spoken, by contrast
, the corsican
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Corsican
language
is the least spoken.
The amount
of French Change the quantifier
number
adults
whose parents spoke Occitan occasionally to them in childhood was bulk the amount
of parents who spoke it habitually. 400 thousand Change the quantifier
number
adults
speak Alsatian to their own children, which is the most spoken language
.
To sum up
everything, the french regional language
is getting less spoken as the
time passes compared to the past.Correct article usage
apply
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