Many people think that the most important things in life are free (i.e. they cannot be bought). Do you agree or disagree?

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Recently, the majority of people believe that there is the most necessary things are supplied in our life for free and they cannot be bought. According to the statement, the most stuff that imperative needs can be affection, other's feelings, other's trust or time and air. While the others can be bought with enough salary

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as food, accommodation, a vehicle and something like that. Personally, I absolutely agree with

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topic. Because for me, a thing that everybody is extremely needed for is friendship. Namely, anybody can not survive or live without emotion;

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not mean only love from another one, but including self-desirable, self-esteem and the pleasure of their soul.

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not surprising when there is the news that a billionaire was suicide even though they have much power and a lot of cash. Especially, people know that being a rich person can be successfully almost happy living in the world.

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, sometime they would be misfortunate

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because sometimes their wealth or power can not buy their happiness.

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, when they have got a crush on someone or something, they might be stuck in hopelessness and wish that guy to adore them back. Unfortunately, even if they have many properties or stabilities, they are still disappointed and regret their failure in affection because cash could not buy their pleasure feelings from the other. Eventually, sometimes, the important stuff can not evaluate or estimate value costs

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as love, time and air. That equipment is the most valuable in anybody's life that I have been mentioning it.

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, they can not reject that the main necessary thing in everybody's life must buy pay, which can be for household or food.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

287 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Non-materialistic
Material wealth
Intrinsic value
Subjective well-being
Monetary assets
Fulfilling life
Emotional bonds
Financial security
Life satisfaction
Economic status

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Many people think that the most important things in life are free (i.e. they cannot be bought). Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Do you think your country is doing its best look atfer environment?

Some people think that the only students who are best academic achievers should be rewarded. Others feel that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your opinion.