It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, scientists and

travelers

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have opportunities to go to far-away natural surroundings like the South Pole. It is

in

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my opinion that the cons of

this

possibility

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more than the pros. while travelling to these long-distant

places

is beneficial in terms of seeing and searching new

places

for tourists and scientists, it has harmful impacts on the natural environments and individual life explained in detail as follows: The primary disadvantage of going to remote natural

places

is

inevitable

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environmental detriment.

This

is to say that since the untouched beauty of these areas is usually appealing to

travelers

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travellers

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, it could bring

number

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a number

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of

people

from all over the world to visit

on

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different

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purpose

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. Albeit the government can hold the power to take concrete actions to control

this

situation,

such

journey play a crucial role in human manipulation

such

as producing garbages, cutting trees, and polluting air and water.

Accordingly

, wildlife would be at threat of

damages

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.

Such

negative

point

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points

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weak the importance of

possitive

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positive

points

.

In addition

, distant sites

is

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a hazard to

people

as well. It means that due to inadequate information and

lack

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a lack

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of facilities,

people

run the risk of getting hurt or being in

troubles

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trouble

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of

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unknown factors.

For

instance

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people

might get attacked by kind of animals which never

be

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warned about or

getting

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get

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lost while there is no

any

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emergency aid. With these disadvantages, positive

points

can be overlooked.

conversely

, as a benefit, seeing new areas get a chance to travellers to be somewhere they have never been before.

Besides

, in

this

condition, scientists are capable of finding and gathering new data in person considering achievement for them. In spite of mentioned positive

points

, I am of the opinion that the merits are overshadowed by

demerits

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the demerits

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. Overall, though tourists and

scientific

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scientists

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have options of visiting new

places

and accumulating new information by travelling, detrimental effects on

atmosphere

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the atmosphere

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and

human-beings

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human beings

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is

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are

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a key matter to make

make

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negative

points

more important.