A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice

Dear, Ahmed. I hope
this
message finds you well. I'
m
writing to help you in your tough situation. It's truly difficult to deal with issues
such
as changing schools and not knowing anyone in the school,
however
, I'
m
here to support you.
Firstly
, be attractive to your new colleagues and ask them whatever you want as
this
could break the wall between students.
Secondly
, after we finish the third class we meet in the outdoor area at 9:30 Am, It's really beneficial to engage in general conversation. I would recommend you join clubs
such
as football clubs or sports gyms because
majority
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of students come to these clubs every day. Actually, It encourages you to talk and introduce yourself to friends.
Lastly
, do not be shy to ask me or contact me for advice as I said before I'
m
here to assist you in your difficult situation. Thank you for contacting and trusting me I'
m
eagerly waiting for your response. Best wishes, Naif Nazawi.
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structure
Consider structuring your paragraphs to ensure each one addresses a single main idea, which can make your letter even clearer and more organized.
content
You could elaborate slightly on how to engage in a conversation or suggest specific activities related to the clubs, to further enhance your friend's understanding.
tone
The greeting and closing are appropriately included, giving the letter a friendly tone.
task
The letter presents useful suggestions such as joining clubs and participating in activities, which are well aligned with the task requirement.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • introduce yourself
  • genuine interest
  • rapport
  • like-minded individuals
  • school community
  • volunteer
  • open-minded
  • comfort zone
  • casual setting
  • hobbies and activities
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