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In the modern era, it is easy to sell, buy and work with others through the internet. But others are against it. Do you think this is a positive trend or a negative trend?

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Nowadays the issues relating to shopping via Internet are commonly discussed. Some
people
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 think that it is more feasible to shop from online websites than going to the market and some think it should be prohibited looking at the aftereffects. I personally think the former statement is valid and easy.
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, in the era of the digital world
people
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 are preferring online shopping as they get a huge variety of stuff
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 as clothes, shoes, bags and accessories on a single website than visiting each store and buying, some websites offer heavy discounts on
products
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 which are not available at the store.
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, Myntra releases online sales every month where the
products
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 are cheap and of good quality. Another example is Facebook’s marketplace where
people
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 can sell, and buy used
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such
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 as sofas, television, and stuff.
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, making life easy without spending on petrol and getting stuck in traffic for hours.
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, the cons of online shopping are
people
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 might be fooled by the quality, and the colour of the
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 as shown in the picture or description might turn out to be of low quality.
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, Cyber criminals may rob an individual via online transactions.
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, a hacked link is sent for payment to a person and
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 of ,Rs5000 it deducted 50,000 which will lead to huge losses. To conclude, To have a relaxed shopping experience one needs to be careful with online transactions. Save money while shopping in sales might lead to a triple the rate of the product. One should buy and sell the
products
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 via trustworthy websites than try some random sites.
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