You started in your present job two years ago. You now feel it is important for your career development to move to a different department in the same company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter say what you have learned in your present job suggest how the company would benefit from moving you to a different department explain why you do not wish to leave the company

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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message to request an alteration in my department. In the past two years, I have learned so many lessons in
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company , and the customer service role has provided me with strong skills
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as negotiation and emotional control. which have developed my personality in several aspects. Public relations branch would benefit from my two years of experience in their work, I have a good relationship with customers in
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company ,especially old people, they love me , if I had the chance to work in
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branch I would enhance their way of comunicate based on my prespictive because so many client had complain to me about
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staff. I have a deep connection with
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company because of the years I have spent in it and the good relations
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have with all of my coworkers, and
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do not wish to leave
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I have
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important benefit. Thank you for your consideration. Best regards, Lamar

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Provide more details on how you can help the new department.
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You expressed a strong desire to stay with the company.
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Your introduction and closing were polite and appropriate.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • career development
  • transferable skills
  • professional growth
  • department
  • diversify experience
  • benefit
  • contribute
  • innovate
  • perspective
  • team collaboration
  • job satisfaction
  • company loyalty
  • internal transfer
  • long-term commitment
  • value addition
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