Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to only be meant adult . Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children . What are causes , and what solutions can be taken?
obesity has consequences not only for adults but for young
children
as well and becomes a massive challenge for doctors, pharmaceutical and scientists as they have the responsibility to invent or discover some sort of medicine that could have some control over it. I believe, by changing our lifestyles like diet, and physical activities
we can achieve the desired goals and results.
It is seen that children
nowadays often like to eat junk food
which we all know is enriched in carbohydrates. These carbohydrates are a big source of making child fat and obese. Kids are addicted to fast food
and usually deny homemade food
which is healthier than takeaways. Daily use of junk food
is proven harmful by nutritionists and they recommend once a month is enough. Another reason that is
causing obesity and diseases in turn is the lack of physical activities
especially
for young Add the comma(s)
,especially
children
. They often have a stable routine of school and indoor activities
like playing games
on mobile phones or watching Television but hardly they encouraged to get involve
in Change the form of the verb
involved
after school
Add a hyphen
after-school
activities
by adults. All parents and other family cared about is to make sure they have followed a pre set
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pre-set
routines
. There is hardly Fix the agreement mistake
routine
anytime
fixed for Replace the word
any time
out doors
playing Correct your spelling
outdoors
games
like cricket, football and tennis. This
is highly
alarming condition, that Add an article
a highly
the highly
a
we are feeding our Remove the article
apply
children
rubbish and not teaching them how to burn calories as well.
What we can do to avoid teenage obesity is that, a
stable routine for the Add a missing verb
have a
children
where they should be doing something active like going for a walk, playing some sort of outdoor games
, be actively engage
in school Wrong verb form
engaged
after hours
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after-hours
games
. it will not only improve their health,
but will reduce the chances of heart and other fetal conditions. Another suggestion I would like to give will be that parents, teachers or adults in the family should restrict takeaways or eating outdoors to once a month only and encourage Remove the comma
apply
children
to eat the
homemade Correct article usage
apply
food
. Moreover
, we can make and try different methods to make food
delicious and appealing for the children
to get use
to Change the verb form
used
of
it.
In the end, I believe that eating less junk Change preposition
apply
food
and including a healthy life style
and physical Correct your spelling
lifestyle
activities
will be helpful in moving forward.Submitted by rabipak21 on
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