One of your neighbour's children has accidentally broken the front window of your car.

Dear Sir/Madam. I am your upstairs
neighbor
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neighbour
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.My name is Suhrob.I am writing
you
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to you
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about
happened
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the happened
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accident by your
children
.Cause of my letter to you that you went
a
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on a
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long business trip.I would chat with you about it
by
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face to face but you are not at home.I was at home yesterday evening after work.Suddenly, I heard my
car
's alarm
after
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and after
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that I looked at the bottom of the flat there were some
children
were punching near my
car
then
I immediately went down.Let's look at
with
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it with
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my eyes, my
car
's window was broken.There was nobody after
broken
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the broken
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window.I did not want to call the police for
this
condititionand
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condition and
I tried to find
children
who had broken my
car
's front window.Investigations have shown that the
children
are your
children
.I want you
fix
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it within three days.I hope you
immadiately
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immediately
eliminate it.
Respectly
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Respectively
Respectfully
Respect
, Suhrob.
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