One of your neighbour's children has accidentally broken the front window of your car.

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Dear Sir/Madam. I am your upstairs

neighbor

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neighbour

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.My name is Suhrob.I am writing

you

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to you

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about

happened

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the happened

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accident by your

children

.Cause of my letter to you that you went

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on a

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long business trip.I would chat with you about it

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apply

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face to face but you are not at home.I was at home yesterday evening after work.Suddenly, I heard my

car

's alarm

after

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and after

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that I looked at the bottom of the flat there were some

children

were punching near my

car

then

I immediately went down.Let's look at

with

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it with

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my eyes, my

car

's window was broken.There was nobody after

broken

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the broken

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window.I did not want to call the police for

this

condititionand

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condition and

I tried to find

children

who had broken my

car

's front window.Investigations have shown that the

children

are your

children

.I want you

fix

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to fix

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it within three days.I hope you

immadiately

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immediately

eliminate it.

Respectly

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Respectively

Respectfully

Respect

, Suhrob.

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Sentence 2 - Example
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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

142 words

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One of your neighbour's children has accidentally broken the front window of your car.

Fully explain your ideas

It is as important to teach children to protect the environment as it is to teach them to read and write. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In many countries governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public.Why is this happening?Do you think this an appropriate use of government money?

You live with a roommate at university but you have trouble studying because of a problem related to your roommate. Write a letter to an administrator at your university and include: -Who you are -The problem -What you suggest they do

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?