Some people believe that education is the key to tackling hunger worldwide while others feel that the answer is in food aid. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In today's modern world, hunger is one of the most difficult
problem
which is known in the whole world. Change to a plural noun
problems
Moreover
, some people
suppose that the problem
of famine can be solve
by science while others guess the solution for Change the verb form
be solved
this
is food
aid
. In my opinion, education
is the fastest and most efficient way
to resolve this
an
age-old trouble due to the fact that Correct article usage
apply
education
can provide new ways of growing plants which can reduce time consuming
process. Add a hyphen
time-consuming
This
essay will discuss both sides.
Today the science sphere is developing rapidly which can lead to tackling hunger worldwide. Firstly
, education
can creat
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create
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a way
way
for that plants will grow quicker than before which will solve Fix the agreement mistake
ways
problem
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the problem
a problem
with
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of
lack
of Correct article usage
the lack
food
. For example
, scientists created ways to protect fruits and vegetables from insects, and these methods are used everywhere. Besides
, if government allocate more money on
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to
researches
, it will solve many other troubles in the world which will be beneficial not only for one part of Fix the agreement mistake
research
community
.
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the community
a community
In
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On
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the other
other hand
, some Change the wording
another hand
other hands
people
believe that problem
can be solve
only by Change the verb form
be solved
food
aid
. Unfortunately, this
way
is unefficient
because it is expensive and government should allocate many Correct your spelling
inefficient
people
and food
for this
. Besides
, some countires
have a multitude of other problems, so they are unable to provide Correct your spelling
countries
such
support. However
, these nations able
to provide other Add a missing verb
are able
helpsuch
as send scientists or Correct your spelling
help such
allocate
some old Wrong verb form
allocating
reserch
information which will be beneficial to find Correct your spelling
research
search
solution
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a solution
the solution
for
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to
this
trouble.
In conclusion, despite all benefits of food
aid
, science is only one way
to tackling
hunger worldwide. Wrong verb form
tackle
Also
, thissolution
can lead to other benefits Correct your spelling
this solution
such
as other problems will also
solve by this
motion. On top of that, education
is more efficent
than Correct your spelling
efficient
food
aid
since government
does not should allocate many Add an article
the government
people
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