Some people believe that education is the key to tackling hunger worldwide while others feel that the answer is in food aid. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In today's modern world, hunger is one of the most difficult

problem

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which is known in the whole world.

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, some

people

suppose that the

problem

of famine can

be solve

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by science while others guess the solution for

this

food

aid

. In my opinion,

education

is the fastest and most efficient

way

to resolve

this

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age-old trouble due to the fact that

education

can provide new ways of growing plants which can reduce

time consuming

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process.

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essay will discuss both sides. Today the science sphere is developing rapidly which can lead to tackling hunger worldwide.

Firstly

education

can

creat

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a way

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way

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for that plants will grow quicker than before which will solve

problem

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the problem

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with

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lack

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food

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, scientists created ways to protect fruits and vegetables from insects, and these methods are used everywhere.

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, if government allocate more money

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researches

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, it will solve many other troubles in the world which will be beneficial not only for one part of

community

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the community

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other hand

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, some

people

believe that

problem

can

be solve

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only by

food

aid

. Unfortunately,

this

way

unefficient

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inefficient

because it is expensive and government should allocate many

people

and

food

for

this

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, some

countires

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countries

have a multitude of other problems, so they are unable to provide

such

support.

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, these nations

able

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to provide other

helpsuch

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help such

as send scientists or

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some old

reserch

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information which will be beneficial to find

solution

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a solution

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for

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this

trouble. In conclusion, despite all benefits of

food

aid

, science is only one

way

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hunger worldwide.

Also

thissolution

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this solution

can lead to other benefits

such

as other problems will

also

solve by

this

motion. On top of that,

education

is more

efficent

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efficient

than

food

aid

since

government

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does not should allocate many

people

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