Some people believe that education is the key to tackling hunger worldwide while others feel that the answer is in food aid. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In today's modern world, hunger is one of the most difficult
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which is known in the whole world.
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, some
people
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suppose that the
problem
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of famine can
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by science while others guess the solution for
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is
food
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aid
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. In my opinion,
education
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is the fastest and most efficient
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to resolve
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age-old trouble due to the fact that
education
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can provide new ways of growing plants which can reduce
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process.
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essay will discuss both sides. Today the science sphere is developing rapidly which can lead to tackling hunger worldwide.
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,
education
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can
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way
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for that plants will grow quicker than before which will solve
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problem
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the problem
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with
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lack
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the lack
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of
food
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.
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, scientists created ways to protect fruits and vegetables from insects, and these methods are used everywhere.
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, if government allocate more money
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researches
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, it will solve many other troubles in the world which will be beneficial not only for one part of
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the community
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other hand
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, some
people
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believe that
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can
be solve
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only by
food
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aid
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. Unfortunately,
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way
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is
unefficient
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inefficient
because it is expensive and government should allocate many
people
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and
food
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for
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.
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, some
countires
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countries
have a multitude of other problems, so they are unable to provide
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support.
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, these nations
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to provide other
helpsuch
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help such
as send scientists or
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some old
reserch
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information which will be beneficial to find
solution
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a solution
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for
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this
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trouble. In conclusion, despite all benefits of
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aid
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, science is only one
way
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to
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hunger worldwide.
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,
thissolution
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this solution
can lead to other benefits
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as other problems will
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solve by
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motion. On top of that,
education
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is more
efficent
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efficient
than
food
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aid
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since
government
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the government
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does not should allocate many
people
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