computer these days can translate all kinds of language with greatee accuracy.Hence, our children will not need to learn more language in the future. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, computers are able to convert all types of languages with great reliability.

Therefore

, our young students will not need to

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acquire

more languages in the coming years.

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essay disagrees with

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statement because learning a foreign

language

is vital to develop

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skills and companies look for bilingual people to be immediately hired. Learning a foreign

language

helps

children

to become better students because it

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be

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and work harder to be

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proficient

speaker

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.

Firstly

, wanting to speak a foreign

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a child

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to

study

and practice every day, so

this

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him to be consistent and

study

hard.

Secondly

, having a

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schedule

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children

to

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improve their capabilities

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learning and retaining new knowledge.

For instance

, the NewYork-Times Newspaper wrote an article

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which states that those

children

who were able to speak a foreign

language

were smarter and reached a degree level when they were adults in 1999. Another reason is that most companies ask their employees to be bilingual because they want to get the most customers possible. More importantly, having

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bilingual

personnel lead the company to attract more clients for those who are not able to speak English.

In addition

to

this

, bilingual people look smarter than the rest of the applicants, and very often they are hired with 25% more salary. To explain

further

, in California, Kaiser hospitals immediately hired bilingual nurses who apply

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company, and these are hired with

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salary than the rest of the nurses who

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not speak another

language

. In conclusion, it is vital to learn a foreign

language

to help

children

to become better students.

Although

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we have computers to do

this

task,

this

is not the intention of it. What is more important, these

children

will be hired with a high-paying salary than those who speak only one

language

.