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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

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Everyone will read their favourite books, and magazines, and
also
 follow breaking
news
 on the
internet
 in the coming future. Because
this
 way can save either their
time
 or
money
 and
also
 will be much easier than the traditional ways, but in some developing countries might be hard to achieve that goal.I partially agree with that statement and I will discuss it, in
this
 essay.
First
 and foremost, technology has brought many changes into our lives and is making our routines easier day by day. It can have a great impact on every aspect of our lives.
For instance
, we can go to every library we tend to with just a click. If you want to buy printed newspapers, you should go in-store shopping and it can take your
time
 for at least half an hour and
also
 you should spend
money
 on them. But, nowadays
people
 can surf websites and read breaking and newsworthy
news
 just for 2 minutes and
this
 way save their
time
 and
money
, the most valuable things in everyone's life.
Secondly
, if you buy a certain newspaper, your information is limited to just one source of
news
 and it can influence your in-depth knowledge about trending events or discoveries.
Also
, scientists would have access to every reference and paper they want and it causes development in science. But, in some developing countries, the
internet
 will not be cheap enough for everyone. Some
people
 would not have access to free
internet
 and can not read
news
 and books on the web and online websites, because of lack of
money
 and
also
 cutting-edge facilities for connecting to the world wide web. By way of conclusion, most
people
 will find their favourite topics and books on the
internet
 because technology has made our life easier and more convenient than before and it can save us
time
 and
money
. But, in some developing countries,
people
 will not have access to the
internet
 because of financial issues.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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