In some countries online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think it is positive or negative development.

It is true that today more and more
people
do their purchases on the internet
instead
of going to physical stores. It affects
people
in many ways. In my opinion, I believe the drawback of online shopping outweighs the advantages.
However
, in
this
essay , I will explore both aspects and demonstrate my opinion. On the
one
hand, critics may point out that,
one
of the most significant drawbacks of online shopping is taking too much time to deliver. Because some online shops deliver only working days or months depending on the distance and shipping policy.
Furthermore
, unsafe delivery service. Maybe some
items
were broken while delivering like
products
made from glass, some food
items
and paper
products
. On
some
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the biggest problem of online shopping is that we didn't receive the
items
we ordered. Especially, clothes and shoes. Many websites show us very quality
products
, but they receive fake
products
. Sometimes not receive the goods. For a good example,
one
day I buy a rechargeable lamp. So the details sheet mentioned charging that lamp 24 horses. I charged it for 2 days. But it does not work. According to
this
reason, some
people
don't like online shopping.
On the other hand
, there are a number of arguments in favour of my stance.
One
of the most preponderant ones is that we can find things we like in many shops.
For instance
, there are so many online shops. So they sell a variety of
items
in
one
type.
Therefore
we can find things as we wish. And
also
online shopping is very easier for our busy life. We can buy things at home. Either we can cancel the order quickly as we want. In conclusion,
although
online shopping can bring more benefits for
people
in modern life.
However
, from my point of view, online shopping has some benefits it cannot surpass its drawbacks.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unparalleled convenience
  • remote areas
  • wide range of products
  • broad selection
  • price comparison
  • customer satisfaction
  • value for money
  • impact on local businesses
  • economic diversity
  • job losses
  • environmental implications
  • packaging waste
  • carbon emissions
  • carbon footprint
  • data privacy
  • cybersecurity
  • personal data
  • tactile shopping experience
  • immediate gratification
  • physically examined
  • robust measures
  • consumer information
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