In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad in holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

People
go on
holidays
to enjoy their lives. Some
people
go on
holiday
in their own
countries
and others go abroad. When considering
about
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people
choosing their own
country
and other
countries
, I agree that
people
would want to go on
holidays
in their own
countries
rather than travelling abroad.
First
and foremost, when going
to
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abroad, we must be going thousands of miles,
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of
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people
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are using
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airlines for their abroad. As we know due to the current crisis situation air ticketing prices are going to the sky when we compare
with
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them with
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the local travelling cost. Though
people
think that when they
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with in
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within
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the
country
they can experience
such
a long
holiday
under the luxurious facilities while they expending these abroad
holiday
cost
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to
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the local
holiday
.
For example
,
latest
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traveling
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magazine reviled that due to the higher air fling cost, airline booking is dropped by 20% compared with the
last
year.
On the other hand
,
most
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of
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countries
people
are only knowing and using their mother tong. As we know when we
traveling
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travelling
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the
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a
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forign
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foreign
country
we must know the English
language
even the native
language
of that particular
country
.
For instance
, while I
travelling
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to
the
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Spain
last
year, I face some difficulties while
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communicating with
people
of
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the
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Spain as my Spanish
language
is zero. But I can manage that trip
,
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because I communicated through
English
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the English
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language
and it is not easy
to
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me. To sum up,
People
always are looking
most
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ways before selecting
the
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holidays
.
However
, due to the above
facts
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they are always limited to
own
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their own
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country
when
holidays
. So, I totally agree with
this
statement.
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