It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that those who get wedded early bring a positive impact both on the country they live in and themselves. From my perspective,
this
can have a number of drawbacks that I am going to list Linking Words
further
.
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To begin
with, sometimes couples start making children right after getting married. Linking Words
Although
offspring can bring strong bonds into a family, it is Linking Words
also
required to pay them enough attention, Linking Words
teach
and care about them properly. Correct word choice
and teach
This
can be difficult due to lack of Linking Words
life
experience due to which having children might be better in families after 30. Use synonyms
For example
, young parents that did not get the required wisdom might not be able to deal with raising a child in the right way as Linking Words
this
requires fundamental Linking Words
life
knowledge. Use synonyms
As a result
, younglings do not get the right advice and information from their parents Linking Words
instead
they have to learn Linking Words
on
own mistakes.
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Furthermore
, marriage is a significant decision in Linking Words
life
that brings a number of financial responsibilities due to which both wife and husband have to make sure they can handle it. Use synonyms
For instance
, it is a widespread situation when a young family has no proper place to live as they lived with their parents before. Linking Words
Besides
, it is crucial to be able to take care of each other as it is a significant part of living together. Financial arguments and disabilities might bring discord to a family which could be avoided if a couple would get married Linking Words
in
a more mature age with a career to be more developed.
To conclude, people should make sure they can cope with crucial responsibilities in terms of family wealth and children before getting married as Change preposition
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this
can have a significant impact on their Linking Words
life
.Use synonyms
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