Your Overseas friend has invited you to visit his country. You are planning to visit him. Write a letter to your friend, In your letter. •Thank him for the invitation & accept the invitation. •Write detail about your visit. •Briefly describe what you want to do there.

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Dear Simon, I hope my letter will find you in good health. The reason why I am writing is to thank you for the invitation to your country and I am over the moon to accept your offer. First of all, thank you for inviting me to travel to your hometown and agreeing with me to be a companion during the holiday.

Besides

, putting me up

while

I am there is your favour. When it comes to my plans, I am going to fly at 9 o’clock in the morning on Friday. I think the flight will

last

four hours and I will arrive at about lunchtime, so I would like to have lunch with you in a café near the beach. During my stay, I would be interested to explore the capital city of your country.

Moreover

, it would be better if we could go on a cruise together in the suburbs.

Finally

, I have the intention of going fishing and watching the sunset with you. I look forward to meeting you as soon as possible. Best wishes, Arthur

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coherence cohesion

Try to enhance paragraphing by ensuring that each paragraph presents a clear single idea, thus avoiding any slight mix of different ideas within the same paragraph.

task achievement

Ensure a more precise elaboration of details concerning your visit to assist your friend in understanding your plans better.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

180 words

9.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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