You work for a small company. You need to arrange for some time off work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter • explain why you want to take time off work • give details of how long you will be away • suggest how you will make up for the lost time

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to draw your attention to requesting some break time for my work. I have been employed in

this

position for two years without any absent times. Due to my conscientious work, I cordially request three weeks' vacation for my

shift timetable.

In addition

, I have to make good use of

this

time to recharge myself, and it is beneficial for our company as well. I would like to take an advanced business administration course at Langara College, and

this

course only opens at that particular time. I believe that the curriculum of

this

course could enhance my knowledge related to the managerial position. The new coordinator has already promised to replace my duties when I will be unavailable during that period. Since I have guided him on how to complete my job requirement for six months, he is proficient in outputting the equivalent efficiency as I have done recently. I look forward to hearing your approval regarding my inquiry. Yours faithfully, Claire Chen

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