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​In developing countries, children in rural communities have less access to education. Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers, while other think that the problem can be solved by providing computers and internet access. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Students
 in villages have fewer means of education in several sections of developed countries. It is considered
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many that
this
 issue would be resolved by building educational institutes in villages and giving intelligent educators.
However
, some people believe that with the help of tech gadgets and digitalisation
this
 issue can be resolved. I opine that instructors are performing a major role in
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 careers rather than computers. There are several ways which can help to enhance the educational level of rural children.
To begin
 with, the government should grant funds to private institutions, so that they can build more schools and colleges in rural areas. These schools have equal amenities as urban schools
such
 as libraries and well-equipped laboratories.
Secondly
, a majority of
teachers
, avoid working in villages, in
this
 case, the government should pay higher wages to
teachers
 and other perquisites for a better lifestyle.
Finally
, the educational authorities should hire intelligent educators who will help
students
 in academics so that they can have a better future. It is argued by some that the problem of education could be solved by using technological gadgets with proper internet connection.
However
, to run
this
 equipment efficiently skilled
teachers
 are required.
Furthermore
,
students
 can get information on various academic subjects on digital platforms but for a better understanding of concepts,
students
 required experts. In conclusion, I strongly believe,
teachers
 are irreplaceable. The personal touch of a teacher is extremely important for a student's better carrier.
However
,
teachers
 can take the help of gadgets and the internet to acquaint the student with current affairs.
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