You work for a small company. You need to arrange for some time off work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter • explain why you want to take time off work • give details of how long you will be away • suggest how you will make up for the lost time

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

to inform you that I have booked a slot for a workshop on management and communication skills which is happening in California. I need to attend that workshop as I believe I need to work on these subjects in my professional life.

Moreover

, I have been waiting for it for so long. It is happening

weekend on 12th and 13th November,

furthermore

, I have a flight to take one day before i.e Friday night.

Therefore

, I would appreciate it if you could give me an off on Saturday on 12th. I would assure you I will make up for

this

lost time. I have talked to Sara, and being a teammate she is willing to do work at my place where I am required for that particular day.

In addition

, I can work extra shifts,

similarly

, I can

also

come to the office on any Sunday you like. I would be very grateful to you if you allow me a day off. Yours faithfully, Leo

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