In the past, important knowledge of culture and history was stored in museum. Nowadays information is freely available on internet, therefore is no longer need for museum. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Valuable pieces of information about each civilisation have been kept in locations

that

is

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called

museums

,

however

, some opine remote technology has changed it and created a private space for the preservation of

knowledge

in a public area which is named network space , so,I completely disagree with

this

status ,because, there are different kinds of cultural

museums

like sculptures , paintings , handicrafts that each person wants to gain information in depth and width must look closely on them, while , virtual experiences are drawn a whole vision of cultural backgrounds ,

therefore

, I will discuss that modern spaces like internet have the suitable option

instead

of

museums

or not.

First

,

knowledge

which has stemmed from history and culture cannot save in network places ,because ,all senses of human must involve in the special monument to understand its reality ,so, it has not evitable without close watching and touching

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the percept of different aspects ,

for example

, you consider a picture which has shown a skull of old animal that you need to compare with another one , it has not suitable to reach out in discoveries about the nature of it by the figure on websites , it will confuse our scientists .

Although

access to giant libraries

such

as

museums

might be an alternative pathway to have all information in a convenient and speedy route for individuals that need to get a whole view of a specific discipline ,

consequently

, there is a genome platform where has designated by professionals to give an opportunity to have all genes identification to share their own

knowledge

, but , it has not replaced

instead

of real experiments on DNA studies . In conclusion , online

museums

have offered a whole picture of every cultural background in specific spots of history ,

however

, it has been well-understood that developing our

knowledge

in depth and width needs real experiences ,so , I would remain my view that cultural

museums

have not kept in online spaces .