Recent research has confirmed that ‘human activity has become the greatest threat to plant and animal life. Why do you think this has happened? How can we reduce our impact on the natural world?
The latest study has proved that "the biggest menace for plant and animal life is human activity". I believe
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kind of phenomenon can happen because of human exploitation of nature, and I Linking Words
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argue that there is a way that people can do to save Earth.
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with, human exploitation is the main reason why much wildlife is extinct. Linking Words
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kind of activity has happened because of the increase of humans every year, and it can escalate the need for food. Linking Words
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phenomenon has led to much wildlife being hunted by humans to fulfil human necessities. Linking Words
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, Research in Japan showed that several types of fish in Japan are extinct because they are fishing many of them to fulfil the needs of their citizens which increase every year.
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situation is to produce a new type of meal that does not use any wildlife. Linking Words
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solution is really helpful because reducing the number of people in Linking Words
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world is harder than reducing the need for food that comes from plants or animals. Linking Words
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, United States scientists found meat that can be produced by using a cell from a cow, and the taste is the same as the original meat. Linking Words
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, it was reducing the need for cows in that country.
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anomaly has happened because human exploitation had a purpose to fulfil the necessity of food for humans, and Linking Words
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problem can be solved by providing a new type of fare. Linking Words
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kind of issue needs to be settled as soon as possible, to reduce the bad impact that will happen to our nature.Linking Words
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task response
Improve clarity and coherence in expressing ideas. Use appropriate examples and evidence to support the points made in the essay.
coherence and cohesion
The essay lacks a clear introduction and conclusion. Work on structuring the essay to include these essential components.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite