Many people use written language in a less formal and more relaxed way. Why? Does this development have advantages? Give reasons and example
Many
people
use
written language in a less formal and more relaxed way. Why? Does this
development
have advantages? Give reasons and example
In my , opinion many people
nowadays use
written language in a less formal way and this
related
to the increasing numbers of Add a missing verb
is related
people
that are able to write and to the technological revolution.
First
of all twenty-one century are well-known us
era of technological Correct pronoun usage
apply
development
which means people
are more active compared to their ancient relatives. For ,example compare to ten years early
we can contact each other and inform about some issues just with one massage. Calling someone and having a short conversation about the same issue would take 5 to 10 minutes butChange the word
earlier
Correct article usage
a
message
took only 2 of them. Rapid Fix the agreement mistake
messages
development
have
given us enormous ways to save Change the verb form
has
time
but at the same time
it requires us to be faster while making decisions or actions. As Add a comma
,time
Correct article usage
a result
result
formal writing style which requires extra Add a comma
,result
attencion
and Correct your spelling
attention
time
are
not suitable for Change the verb form
is
needs
of Correct article usage
the needs
time
.
Add an article
the time
Second
reason Add an article
The second
of
formal writing getting less used is the high Change preposition
for
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
people
that have been tought
how to read and write. In the other words writing now is Correct your spelling
taught
an
universal tool for information exchange and as it Change the article
a
is
always has been, Unnecessary verb
apply
people
prefer to make their tools more easy
Replace the words
easier
for
Change preposition
to
use
. Compare to old times austetics
of writing is not a Correct your spelling
aesthetics
priorited
for human beings. Correct your spelling
priority
prioritised
For
example
when I was Add a comma
,example
at
Change preposition
in
first
grade having a
beautiful handwriting was my Remove the article
apply
mothers
Change noun form
mother's
first
demand from
me. But after 15 years since I was a Change preposition
of
first
classer parents
reaction Change noun form
parents'
parent's
was
shifted from children’s writing towards their speaking skills. In my Unnecessary verb
apply
opinion
it is again Add a comma
,opinion
releated
to Correct your spelling
related
the
our Remove the article
apply
words
new direction where Change noun form
word's
words'
time
is the most important resource. If technological development
and new IT technology hadn’t been developped
.Would formal writing skills be required as Correct your spelling
developed
the
Correct article usage
an
impotant
skill in Correct your spelling
important
the
social life? I Correct article usage
apply
ussume
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assume
even
in Correct word choice
that even
this
case formal writing would lose its popularty
. We should accept that relaxed and more fast writing Correct your spelling
popularity
are
Change the verb form
is
more easy
to learn and Replace the words
easier
use
compare
to Change the form of the verb
compared
time consuming
and dry formal style. In the Add a hyphen
time-consuming
future
I believe in-formal writing will make Add a comma
,future
process
of learning a lot more Add an article
the process
easyier
for childrenCorrect your spelling
easier
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