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Humans are producing an incraesing amount of trash everyday and the world is becoming full of the landfills we use to get rid of our trash. In your opinion, how can recycling save the environment and help the people on Earth?

Person
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People
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 are producing
an
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a
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 growing amount of
garbage
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everyday
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every day
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and
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, and
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 the world is becoming full of
the
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apply
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landfills
we
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where we
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use
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used
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 to get rid of our
garbage
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. In my
opinion
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garbage
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 has become very rare these days. To keep the
environment
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 clean , you should never litter. Nowadays, there is a lot of trash in the streets.
People
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 are throwing them in bins rather than in the trash.
This
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 is the worst habit. There is a
specila
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special
 place for dumping
waste
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. Should be thrown here. But those
waste
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 houses are
also
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 full of
garbage
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. These wastes are very harmful to the
environment
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. It has a very bad effect on
people
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's lives. There are special places where
waste
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 is taken to
this
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 place
and
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, and
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 produced again the
environment
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 will be cleaned.
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,
this
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 job
js
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is
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 the best job. If the
garbage
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 is taken to a special place, the
environment
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 will be clean. It is not harmful to human life. But
people
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 are doing
those
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that
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damages
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damage
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 because they are throwing
garbage
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 on the street. Even if it is standing in front of a special
waste
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 room, it is not treated like that.
Waste
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 houses are
also
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 being filled.
People
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 are saying a lot of things. Does not appreciate them. If
people
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 make good use of things
instead
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 of throwing them away ,
waste
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 will
also
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 be reduced. The
environment
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 is
also
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 cleaned. But our president is trying his best to protect us from these harmful things. Special
waste
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 processing plants are being opened. Which
help
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helps
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 keep the
environment
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 much cleaner.
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, everyone should dispose of
garbage
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 in special
waste
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 bins. It does not affect the lives of others. In conclusion, all the
garbage
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 should be thrown into landfills
and
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, and
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 if they do that, we can keep the
environment
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 clean.

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organization
Structure your essay with a clear start, middle, and end. Put your main idea in the first paragraph and keep to it.
development
Explain how recycling can help the Earth and people. Give 1-2 real ideas or examples.
language
Use simple, correct words. Check spelling and grammar. Use full stops and capital letters in the right way.
content
There is a focus on waste in the city and the need to put it in the right place.
coherence
There are some linking words like On the other hand and but to show a link between ideas.

Fully explain your ideas

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycle
  • recycling
  • reduce
  • reuse
  • waste
  • trash
  • landfill
  • pollution
  • pollute
  • energy
  • save
  • emissions
  • greenhouse gases
  • resources
  • paper
  • plastic
  • metal
  • glass
  • curbside
  • bin
  • sorting
  • recyclable
  • non-recyclable
  • compost
  • environment
  • health
  • jobs
  • money
  • city
  • community
  • policy
  • law
  • plan
  • awareness
  • practice
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