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Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely.Discuss both views and five your opinion.

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It is argued that
the
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information's
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 which is about scientific research, business and
academic
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 world should be shared freely or in exchange for
money
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.
Although
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people
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 who try to acquire
information
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 put in an effort, ı strongly believe that
money
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 is not the main purpose for
people
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 who are searching for new
data
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. On one hand, some
people
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 state that if someone shares a piece of
information
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, it needs to be a price for the
information
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 because they endeavour for
this
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. Info providers dedicate their life
such
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 as giving their time, spending lots of
money
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, and showing serious exertion.
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,
this
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 process of creating new
information
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 is very hazardous, leading
people
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 to suppose that it needs to be valued.
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, certain huge companies
such
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 as Samsung or Apple take
data
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 from other companies to send their advertisements to customers,
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, others claim that
data
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 providers share out info for their ego satisfaction. When they share new
data
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 even if it is free, their names are written on the top of the platform, which leads to a good feeling compared to taking
money
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.
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, if someone wants to use it somewhere their
infos
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info
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, one needs to add their work in the references.
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, Aziz Sancar, who is one of the most popular scientists in Turkey, found significant
informationinformation
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information information
 about chemistry which is considered worthy of the Nobel prize and he shared out his project with Turkish scientists. He did it for free,
however
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, everyone knows that
this
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 info belongs to him. In conclusion, whether
accessibility
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 to
information
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 about certain fields should be free or not remains a controversial issue. I completely agree, having
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prestige is more valuable than having
money
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