Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely.Discuss both views and five your opinion.

It is argued that
the
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information's
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which is about scientific research, business and
academic
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world should be shared freely or in exchange for
money
.
Although
people
who try to acquire
information
put in an effort, ı strongly believe that
money
is not the main purpose for
people
who are searching for new
data
. On one hand, some
people
state that if someone shares a piece of
information
, it needs to be a price for the
information
because they endeavour for
this
. Info providers dedicate their life
such
as giving their time, spending lots of
money
, and showing serious exertion.
Therefore
,
this
process of creating new
information
is very hazardous, leading
people
to suppose that it needs to be valued.
For example
, certain huge companies
such
as Samsung or Apple take
data
from other companies to send their advertisements to customers,
On the other hand
, others claim that
data
providers share out info for their ego satisfaction. When they share new
data
even if it is free, their names are written on the top of the platform, which leads to a good feeling compared to taking
money
.
In addition
, if someone wants to use it somewhere their
infos
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, one needs to add their work in the references.
For instance
, Aziz Sancar, who is one of the most popular scientists in Turkey, found significant
informationinformation
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information information
about chemistry which is considered worthy of the Nobel prize and he shared out his project with Turkish scientists. He did it for free,
however
, everyone knows that
this
info belongs to him. In conclusion, whether
accessibility
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to
information
about certain fields should be free or not remains a controversial issue. I completely agree, having
a
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prestige is more valuable than having
money
.
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