These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting events and festivals. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In recent years, there is more and more variety of
events
and festivals which are created by organisations and the Government. The purposes are making a profit for them and pushing economic growth. I think it is a great idea for making economic development and
also
for solving the problems of stress due to the pressure of work and deadlines.
Firstly
, creating a lot of sporting
events
and festivals help many businesses can make more income.
For instance
, Qatar runs the
World
cup, the biggest soccer event in the
world
, Why did the Qatar Government invest more than three billion dollars in just one month in the event
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The answer is they want to advertise their country to the
world
. The benefits bring back for them are the tourism industry will rise, the food industry are more well known to
people
around the
world
and of ,course there are more investors coming to
this
country after the event end.
Therefore
,
this
makes it clear that the benefits of
events
or festivals will bring enormous economic development.
Secondly
,
people
who are stressed at work and
life
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can blow off some steam by joining in soccer
events
with their family or friends.
That is
one of the good ways to relax or build relationships with others. Dad can take their children to go and enjoy the atmosphere of crowded
people
in the stadium. It is a good experience for the family. Or even couples can enjoy their music festival or food festival on the beaches without worrying about their busy
life
. It obviously makes their
life
better than just working. To achieve personal happiness, we need to balance work and entertainment in our
life
. In conclusion, once again I support
people
spending their money to enjoy their
life
. We make money to expense that so
this
cycle will make economic growth and
people
can balance their
life
.
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