You are having a party at your home to celebrate your birthday and you want to use a catering company to organize the food. You had sone excellent food at a catered party at a friend's house. In your letter ask What do they charge They contact details

Dear Sir or Madam, After greeting, I'm writing
this
letter to you to request a catering
service
from your
cpmpany
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company
to
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for
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my birthday party
next
Sunday, the reason why I choose your company is that you have a good reputation,
furthermore
, I have experienced your
service
before in my
friend
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friend's
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wedding party. I would like to get a quotation that contains all
service
charge
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charges
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in more detail, I work as a customer
service
employee,
thus
, my phone
always
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busy, so please send me your offer to my email address.
Additionally
, it will make
happy
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me happy
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if I get
special
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a special
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discount because my birthday will be on
the
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apply
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Christmas day. Adding to
this
your contact number to call you for any inquiries, as I mentioned it would be much better to contact
by
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you by
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the
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email so I need it as well. I am looking forward
for
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to
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your kind reply. Jack Martin
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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