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More and more business as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face-to-face.What is advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communication

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Technological breakthrough enables people to communicate via online devices rather than in real life.
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, using platforms for video calls declines
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personal contact significantly.
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, individuals lessen the amount of time they see their colleagues or friends due to the fact that they work at home using Zoom or websites on their own without
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 ability to discuss some aspects of their job or their own news in life either in a break or after their work hours.
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, it may cause a lot of members of
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society to be more isolated and gradually start to lose connection. Availability, I would argue, is the key benefit.
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proximity is no longer an obstacle to
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 your partner if you use online services. If there is an urgent meeting with a company employer or just a talk with a close friend, it is affordable for a person to retain connection by using social media
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 as Instagram or Google Meet despite the fact that the person might be ill or in a different country.
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face-to-face meeting does not count all the circumstances whereas technological communication is far ahead. In conclusion, while technologies can cause some noticeable problems with a lack of
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visual contact, it has much more preference in case of a long distance. As
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, I would maintain that the disadvantages are far outweighed by the advantages.

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