Is it better to take a gap year to travel or to go straight to university? Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time?

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of discussions revolving around

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taking

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year gap for travelling or directly taking

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admission into universities after college. In my opinion, encouraging a

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to go

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a vacation by taking a

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gap will not be ideal.

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views and

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. On the one hand, travelling to any new place or country

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become extremely expensive in recent times. Anyhow,

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a

student

cannot afford to go on vacation on their own income

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they need to solely depend on their parents.

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, I had a group of friends where

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every summer they used to travel

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new place along with their parents.

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situation

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might not be

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for every

student

due to

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of financial independence of their family.

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argument that taking a break during any period of studies or career will affect

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anyone

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mind towards distraction. It has been seen in many countries that taking a break during academic studies

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students into other unwanted social activities and

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them addicted to parties. In order to, focus on productive learning around studies it is mandatory to keep progressing in every aspect of life being a

student

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with, taking a break after college

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travelling is an expensive affair for any

student

to afford and they had to depend on

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their parents

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parents

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income. Meanwhile, for productive

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there should not be any year gap which is waste of time in my opinion.