Some people say that the current level of air travel is acceptable where as other people believe air travel should be reduced and the government should play a role in this. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion
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Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
People have different views about whether in this contemporary world, the most important subject for students to study in schools is history or science and Technology. While history can be useful in understanding the ancient details to harness its benefits, I believe that studying world subjects like science, maths and Technology is more useful to compete with other nations.
Economic growth is prioritized above all other concerns by the state, in many nations. The advantages of this are, improved quality of life of people and good infrastructure. The disadvantages of prioritizing economic growth above all other concerns are unaffordable cost of living and more environmental damage.
Some folks believe that the killers should be given life imprisonment rather than a death- sentence to avoid further murders in the community.Although true to some extent, I tend to disagree with this statement because of the fact that strict decisions are needed to purify society from criminals.
Undoubtedly, with the advancement of technology, human development in various fields has progressed apparently. Some people argue that modern citizens posses more novel inventions and diverse social welfare which are superior to past era. Personally, I am in favor of the statement and the reason will be thoroughly elaborated on as follows.
It is said that through intelligence one can achieve success.It is a common belief that if a person lacks intelligence what is the guarnantee that the person can acquire success in any other parametres. I strongly oppose it. In my opinion, one can actually accomplish many things without being smart.