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some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones. Is this a positive development or a negative one. Give reasons for your answers and give relevant examples from your experience.

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It is clear that mobile
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 have become popular nowadays and can'
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people argue that
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 way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay. Most
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 bring their own
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 has consequences because when
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 are in
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 can receive a text or ringing for their buzz and
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 can carry a distraction and not be able to develop in
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 and not focus when the teacher explains subjects.
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 can be a reason because some
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 have bad qualifications.My own experience is a compelling example of
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. I have a young cousin and he was born in
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 are essential for everything but he is in college and they don'
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, there is another thing that schools should be restricted to mobiles , which is when
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 use
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 for bullying and to create their peer's mental issues .
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, when they bring their mobile
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 and they wouldn'
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, there are a lot of videos on the internet where we can see youths and teachers have been recorded and uploaded on social media. In conclusion, I strongly believe that
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 have been a good invention but can causes effects on youths children when are in
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