Nowadays many students choose to take a year off before going to university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of taking a gap year, and give your own opinion about whether it is a good idea.
More and more
students
have a gap year
between high school and university
. Some people
think that there are some drawbacks to take
a Wrong verb form
taking
year
off, but in my opinion, young people
can gain more benefits
for their future, which
I definitely agree about Correct word choice
and
this
view.
Some people
think that there are lots of drawbacks to a have a year
off before going to university
. Firstly
, the students
taking a year
off who
need financial support from their family, Correct pronoun usage
apply
otherwise
they need to work for their living that Add a comma
,otherwise
year
. For example
, the job they work may not they are really interested
, and it wastes their time. Replace the word
interesting
For
example
a busy student might have to take a Add a comma
,example
part time
role to make some wagesAdd a hyphen
part-time
,
or ask their family to send them a monthly stipend. Remove the comma
apply
Secondly
, they have one year
behind from
their classmates, Change preposition
apply
it
will lead Correct pronoun usage
apply
that
they have no common language with their classmates. Correct word choice
apply
Finally
, not every
Correct quantifier usage
all
parents
understand the student’s decision to a Change to a singular noun
parent
year
off which will make them have not a good relationship with their family, especially in a low-income family.
On the other hand
, I think that young people
can get more benefits
from taking a year
off before they choose a field to study at university
. Firstly
, they can have more time to find the field they really
Add a missing verb
are really
interest
Add a missing verb
are interest
as
their subject to study at Change preposition
in as
university
. Secondly
, students
have more chances to try different kinds of jobs that will help them gain different experience
. Fix the agreement mistake
experiences
For example
, even if students
just work as a sales assistant
in a job, they can learn communication skills to talk with different Fix the agreement mistake
assistants
people
which is a useful skill for their whole life. Finally
, young people
can broaden their network from
Change preposition
in
the
real society not just from school.
In conclusion, there are drawbacks and Correct article usage
apply
benefits
of
taking a gap Change preposition
to
year
, but I think young people
can gain more benefits
from taking a year
off before going to university
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