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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular
species
 of flora and fauna.
However
, others say that there are more important environmental
problems
. I would explain both views and the following reasons that support the argument. Particular
species
 are several
numbers
 of flora and fauna that are lively in the entire world. Mutualism is the closed connection between two or more individuals that have a strong benefit
either
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 themselves or other organisms. I do believe that the connection between them could influence other
numbers
 because the
numbers
 are related to preservation. If I could help preserve the
numbers
 of that
species
 it would help sustain the endangered
species
.
For example
,
Alga
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algae
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 is one of the water animals that help
the
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offshore abrasion.
On the other hand
, say that there are more important environmental
problems
.
Otherwise
, there should be accumulation
problems
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of problems
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 that impact the environment. Regarding those conditions, the balancing system in the entire world is not as easy
anymore
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than
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 it was in the past. The
Earth
 seems to retain too many
problems
 in the world.
As a result
, The
Earth
 can not stand for a long time to make an individual on it still alive. In conclusion, It is more than likely that the environmental problem that occurs now is
accumulation
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 from more than two reasons. Before our
Earth
 faced that condition now, there was a loss of the supporting system that helped our
Earth
 balance. Eventually, that makes a mixed cause that influences the stabilization of our individuals who live in.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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