More and More people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone.

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Nowadays, urbanization is dramatically increasing for a brighter future prospect in urban.
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, living in the
city
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Could be challenging. Accommodation, accessibility to
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, and finding a proper job are the main problems in the cities. governments could find a solution for
people
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in urban. There are some challenges in a
city
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which
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immigrant
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to deal with them.
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, cities are crowded due to widespread relocation from rural to urban.
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in
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has caused limited opportunities for jobs. It means some
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could not find a job to afford the cost of living in
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.
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, they will be faced with poverty.
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, accommodations are another problem. These days a flat or studio is too expensive. So, some
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forced to live in for away of a
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.
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, they can't access
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and transport
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.
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Government
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needs to find a solution.
government
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supports them with
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a loan
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loan
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with low interest.
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government
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provides small cheap houses quite close
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city
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excel transport
facilities
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to be available for more
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. in Conclusion, there are some difficulties in
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city
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such
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as limited job
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,
house
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and
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Metropolis
  • Rapid urban growth
  • Megacity
  • Urban sprawl
  • Housing affordability
  • Infrastructure development
  • Public transportation
  • Traffic congestion
  • Pollution
  • Noise pollution
  • Green spaces
  • Job market
  • Social cohesion
  • Community engagement
  • Safety measures
  • Crime prevention
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