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There have been many inventions in human history, such as the wheel. Some people think the most important invention is the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Inventions and discoveries have brought drastic changes to our way of life.
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 hard to assess the significance of each discovery, the invention of the wheel and the
internet
 are considered breakthroughs.
Internet
 and wheels Walking was the only means of travel until the wheel was invented. In the contemporary era, our thoughts, emotions and activities are tied up with the
internet
. To recapitulate, wheels and the
internet
 has revolutionized our way of life. We are living in a world where wheels are controlled by the
internet
.
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