Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money?

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makes too much money. Some segments believe that

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a positive impact on normal people's life. I disagree with

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statement to a large extent and I will elaborate on it in the following paragraphs. Others think that someone who has fame deserves that earn a lot of fees.

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, I refuse to believe it since most of them waste their money.

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, they usually buy from luxury brands,

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as Gucci and Prada, e.g. To me, it's not necessary to use the collection of

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, they can pay money to charities or build many schools and hospitals in Third World countries.

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, all the individuals in the whole world will have a great lifesaver and be more satisfied.

In addition

, a rich person can make others jealous.

Moreover

, they may want what celebrities eat ,wear and even where they go.

As a result

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. Believe it or not,

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may lead to them becoming depressed . Because they frequently compare their life with those. It is better if a famous person has an average income and shouldn't show off what he or she has.

To sum up

, after analyzing both sides of the argument It is not hard to see that they must have the same salaries as a doctor, a teacher or an engineer. To me,

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is fairness.