Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however,think that other types of progress are equally important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, governments thought that economic progress is the most important goal but few believe that there are points more important,
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and
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, Personally, I believe that economics is vital in society because humans can'
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administrate their income and expenses correctly. I feel
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essay for two main reasons,which I will explore in the following essay.
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, Economics activities are crucial, so to the
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to be stable economically because
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can bring services
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as food, and goods that need a person to consume
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staff and to produce profits. ,
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most important point in the
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is agriculture because is able to cover basic needs. On one hand, when we use the kitchen to cook our meals, go shopping or have to go work, society is contributing to the economic international and local. My own experience is a compelling example of
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. I am living in a rich
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where they spend a lot of money on social policies to help people who have children or illnesses and contribute to creating new jobs, to have good
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and
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.
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, It is clear that if an
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of a
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stop , the consequences would be something bad for the
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because
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would not grow and governments couldn'
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spend money on
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or
education
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, and the majority of people couldn'
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access
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and
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couldn'
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work or no eat.
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, the
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of countries poor depend on natural resources and agriculture but in these
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governments are corrupt, they leave their society in poverty and a lot of them can to go school or
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because the government don'
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have money to spend to import and export things and they
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have to depend on aid the others countries. In conclusion , I strongly believe that
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is the most important for a
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to develop jobs, export, and import things, and humans can enjoy schools and have a good
health
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic stability
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • Infrastructure
  • Technological advancement
  • Social cohesion
  • Healthcare accessibility
  • Sustainability
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Cultural heritage
  • National identity
  • Balanced development
  • Long-term benefits
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