One of your friends plans to go sightseeing in your country. You used to live in a place that you think she might enjoy visiting. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter you should: briefly describe the attractions of this place recommend accommodation and suggest what he/she should take.

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Dear Raman, I am so happy to hear that you are planning to visit my country. Shimla is a beautiful place and our home is quite near a few good attractions. I suggest you go to Sukhna lake, Dalhousie park, Sidhu and Vishu temple. As per your choice, these all places are very peaceful and beautiful. From your letter, I got to know one more thing that you are coming near Christmas time and I already discussed with my employer about the holiday and will take a few leaves from work to show you some places my own.

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, when you visit our country

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you do not need to worry about the accommodation because you can live with us at our home. We already have one room available in our house.

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, the weather is cold at our place. So, you should pack winter clothes with you. Please bring hard shoes with you because it is a mountain area and you need to walk a lot to visit different places. I hope to see you soon. Best wishes, Simran

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

180 words

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One of your friends plans to go sightseeing in your country. You used to live in a place that you think she might enjoy visiting. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter you should: briefly describe the attractions of this place recommend accommodation and suggest what he/she should take.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Describe how your primary school education looks like?

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building the live in. What are the reason for this? How can people research this?

Water scarcity is a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this? And what solutions can be done by individuals and the government?

Some believe that people today have no interests in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?