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The expansion of multinational companies and increase in globalization produces positive effects to everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

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Globalization has been a radical process which has changed the international and national economies. In that sense, during
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 decades we have been seeing an expansion of multinational
companies
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 and the increase of
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 intertwined economical network from all over the world. In
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 context, I think that the international growth of
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 trademarks does not have positive effects, especially in developing
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. It has been said that when big
companies
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 arrive
to
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 poor nations, they tend to extract the national resources or generate low-paid work for the locals.
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 has been a trend in Southern Asia where national resources are abundant and governments look for
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private investment in their economies.
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, in the case of Southeastern
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countries
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, it is usual that they provide
workers
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 for these big private firms, as
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can be seen with shirts printed in
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 Vietnam or Cambodia. The
workers
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 from that
countries
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 have access to facilities from these
companies
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, but with very scarce salaries.
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 the other hand, some economists have said that locals can have a big opportunity by providing a job for these private institutions. They have said that if a lot of money goes to regional or local
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,
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 money will impact
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positively
 on the country
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 because the wage from
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workers
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 will circulate in the national economy.
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, I think that
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 argument doesn't consider very well the
unequalities
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inequalities
 in the international context and that it's not easy for poor
workers
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 to have access to better conditions. In conclusion, I would say that international
companies
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 generate
and
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 impact
in
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 the local economies, by investing in them. If we consider that it is difficult for a worker
of
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 some poor
countries
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 to have access to better conditions, I would say that the presence of these multinational
companies
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have
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 an impact, depending on the economic development of the nation where they are located
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