Many people believe that social network sites such as fb have had a huge negative impacts on both individuals n society. To what extent do you agree.

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technology is emerging day-

by-

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day which is impacting the lives of various people and

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has a detrimental result on society. In

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paragraphs, I will be emphasising on

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the negative

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aspect

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of social networking sites. To commence with, I believe that social networking sites

such

as Instagram and Facebook are affecting the minds of

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the youngster

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youngster

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in a bad way. Adolescents are becoming addicted to

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technology,

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, they were running towards isolation from their own families and they having aggression

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.

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research conducted by the World Health Organisation on

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addiction

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smart phones

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, it was concluded that there are 53% of

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,

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are

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residing in a rehabilitation centre for the

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usage of mobile phones.

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, one of the biggest

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of indulging in the utilisation of

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and social media is the involvement in crime based on

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the internet

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. As

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the information is not secured enough on online platforms, anyone can hack the account and they could use the information in a negative manner,

then

, the innocent person would have to face the consequences.

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, nowadays, people are getting much

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in

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assault

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the survey conducted by the World Crime Association, it was found out that there are 85% of

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,

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is getting

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in these activities. To conclude, I am firmly convinced by the view that the youth is using

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social media in a negative way on

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huge forum as some personage are getting

addictive

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to the apps and others are opting for

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hacking. There should be some strict laws in the country to overcome the outcome.