The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010.

The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University

in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010.
It is clear from the charts that the
percentage
of
degrees
granted at the National
University
in computer science increased the most between the four different fields that are presented on the charts. In 1990 the field with the most granted
degrees
at the National
University
was business. Since
then
, the
percentage
of granted business
degrees
decreased. By 2010 the
percentage
of granted
degrees
in business dropped
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15%. The
percentage
of granted
degrees
in 2000 in law slightly decreased
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5% in comparison to 1990. After 1990 it rose
for
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5% and in the year 2010 was the same as it was in 1990. The
percentage
of granted medicine
degrees
in 2000 slightly increased
for
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5% in comparison to 1990. It reached its peak in 2000. After 2000 it decreased
for
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5% and in the year 2010 was the same as it was in 1990. The field that had
the
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significant ascent in granted
degrees
at the National
University
was computer science. In 1990 the
percentage
of granted
degrees
in
computer
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science field at the National
University
was 30%. Since
then
it increased
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15%.
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