The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010.
It is clear from the charts that the
percentage
of degrees
granted at the National University
in computer science increased the most between the four different fields that are presented on the charts. In 1990 the field with the most granted degrees
at the National University
was business. Since then
, the percentage
of granted business degrees
decreased. By 2010 the percentage
of granted degrees
in business dropped for
15%. The Change preposition
by
percentage
of granted degrees
in 2000 in law slightly decreased for
5% in comparison to 1990. After 1990 it rose Change preposition
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for
5% and in the year 2010 was the same as it was in 1990. The Change preposition
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percentage
of granted medicine degrees
in 2000 slightly increased for
5% in comparison to 1990. It reached its peak in 2000. After 2000 it decreased Change preposition
by
for
5% and in the year 2010 was the same as it was in 1990. The field that had Change preposition
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the
significant ascent in granted Correct article usage
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degrees
at the National University
was computer science. In 1990 the percentage
of granted degrees
in computer
science field at the National Correct article usage
the computer
University
was 30%. Since then
it increased for
15%.Change preposition
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