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Some people believe that all experiments on animals are bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Is animal testing justified? Are there any other options? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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There is a controversial argument about whether animal
experiments
 should or should not be implemented. I firmly believe, not all experimentation is negative for wildlife, but we have to
instead
 of
experiments
 that damage animal rights and figure out reasonable solutions. The investigations in herds have good examples which do not hurt them and bad instances which abuse them. We should remain that adequate
experiments
 and stop or alternate adverse animal Research.
For instance
, investigators intend to kill
animals
 or ill them. in order to finish the test and
claim
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 that will bring benefits to human life. In
this
 case,
this
 test should be outlawed and the public who cares about animal rights should agitate against
this
 action.
In contrast
, if scientists just research animal safety and promise they will protect
animals
' safety, as well as the discoveries from
experiments
, will be of benefit to humans, these should be retained. Taking consider by baleful instances in animal
experiments
, I suggest two efficient ways.
First
 zoologists need the corpses of
animals
 so they can collect the already-died
animals
 rather than directly killing them. Meanwhile, zoologists
also
 can monitor wildlife in the forest or other natural claims that will bring benefits to human life. In
this
 case,
this
 test should be outlawed and the public who cares about animal rights should be against
this
 action.
In contrast
 scientists research
animals
 and promise they will protect
animals
' safety, as well as the discoveries from
experiments
, will be of benefit to humans, these should be retained. In conclusion, not all experimentation on critters take adverse reactions in them, but we
also
 need to discover and detect
experiments
 which are wound creatures, and these tests should be cut down by laws.
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